I like that you were very organized and wrote alot.You were very specific on the details.IT was really well organized.
I like the way you brought up some ideas of being a knight.All you need to work on is EXPLAINING the ideas you brought up.Cuidado sis!
I think you were very organized min your work, and you described everything well. I suggest you put it in a brighter color for people to see, and also use proper grammar. It's not that easy to learn much when you have a dark color, and a small amount of errors!!!
I like how you included how your life steps were like a knights and like your contract with the mom.(_8(l)
I like the pictures,I think you could work on being more colorful. by hilda
i like how you did every thing
I liked the colors on it but should have improved in including how to become a squire.
I really liked it because it was organized had a beautiful color and its sooooo cute.
I liked how u were very organized with it and the colors are awesome!GREAT WORK!!!:)
I liked all the colors on your thing and it was looking great.
I liked how everything was explaied well with good info. but it was to hard to read, good job